Wetlook World Forum

I would like to commend you for trying something new. Seeing the comments in this thread actually encouraged me to download the scene to see what all the fuss was about.

Generally I liked it, I prefer scenes where there is some sort of narative, I don't like scenes where the model just poses for photos.

I think the narative went well up to the point where the first girl knocked over the tower. When she was informed the forfeit was to get in the bath she should have at least feined some sort of shock and reluctance. Instead at this point you just switched back to the standard photoshoot format.

And there was no reason at all, why the second girl got involved. When I sas the images you posted I assumed that the tower was reset and she was the second looser.

On the plus side, you let the action flow and there was no obvious posing, on the downside the camra person still appeared at least once.

Don't let the dislikes put you off, If you make more scenes like this I may well buy them. But I would like to see more emphasis on the story line, no matter how corny and implausible it is, and less on the photoshoot.

I usualy don't bother downloading the photos, though in this case they were parr of the same ZIP file.

Regards

John